kris

***Hey everyone - first of all, you know that I have never written a haiku before ( Or submitted one atleast), so this is kind of an adventure for me... ...

Hello there, my dearest fellow poet :D Right! If I'm going to be perfectly honest, I didn't enjoy the subject matter at all but that's a matter of taste really ...

Oh god! The amount of poem related poetry that I've written boggles the mind, and so I'm pretty critical about this subject matter. It seems a bit... Blaze, there is ...

If you could read some of the chapters that I've written so far, and lemme know what you think and how I can improve it. I'd be very grateful. The ...

Lol! Don't be sorry, it really isn't important what I or anyone else on this site (for that matter) thinks about your poetry. You are the only one who can ...

To be perfectly honest, I'm not entirely sure about how I feel about this poem. This is not to say that it is a poorly crafted poem, not at all. ...

Well done. :D This poem was pretty well executed. All I would say didn't work was the formatting. It was far too blockey... This made for a very stilted read; ...

Sat beneath a timid tree, Her branches tremble so. The wind bids to sooth me, with gentle winds that blow. Heart shrunk up with fear, I don't know why I'm ...

Midnight and the streets of Derc’s were completely emptied, save for it’s northern quarter; this was the city’s entertainment district. Packed tight with taverns and theatres, as well as the ...

Halt! im not being unintelligible for naught, and there are metaphors. Beat is not in tea shades Not in peasant wanderings Or the singular glare of a Jugular attachment Or ...

Hello Kaylyn, may I just say that I had a lovely time reading this poem of yours. However, as with all things I found room for improvement. So bare with ...

This is a very interesting poem that you have here, my friend. Is the Golden bird perhaps a metaphor for some force within your real life? Or maybe the lives ...

I did so very much enjoy reading the "Dark Magician" trilogy - by Trudy Canavan. Some of the content is a little `pre-teen' and juvenile. BUT!! Her character and world ...

The Quicksilver series ( Quicksilver Zenith in particular) by Stan Nicholls. Was one of the worst set of books that I have ever read. For some reason I couldn't take ...

Hello my friend. Welcome to YWS. I do hope that you enjoy being a part of this community as much as I have. Well, down to the task at hand. ...