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H silverSUNLIGHTx , thank you by the way, for the lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :D The best thing (I feel) about your poem, was it's ability to ...

Hi WarriorOfTheBrimstone. Hope you're OK :D Right, down to the task at hand. The poem was a little bit misleading for me. I really didn't have much idea that it ...

Injustice

Hi Demeter. What a lovely poem you have here, I liked it a lot. I'm with Castlesinthesky on this one, your title is very witty indeed - very eye catching ...

Hey there m'love, do hope you're well and all that. Since everybody seems to have been rude enough, as to ignore your poem, I shall help you as best I ...

Can anyone else shed some light on how else I might improve this poem? I'd really appreciate the advice. Love Kris x

Tell the Moon to dry her tears, which seem to linger in the sky. They’ve stood there for too long, such sorrow one can’t deny. For she’s a wretch who’s ...

Ok, sweetness. The poem's opening stanza is pretty weak. It doesn't grab you, or even make much sense: Well that's not exactly true, but maybe it is. Cats are fury. ...

Check out some of the double dealings that went on in the Chinese imperial court, duing the Song dynasty...

A Masquerade, has it's own specific style; which sadly most people bastardize. In a traditional Venetian Masquerade, one should wear a costume of a classical god or baroque dress. The ...

If heaven only knows, then what are we to do? When preying to a God, you can't speak to. Frost now gathers in, for yuletide to begin. Festivals given nye, ...

Ty :D Anyone else willing to offer some opinion on my poem? x

Hey... Can anyody help? :/

I plunged into the current, to see what I could find. Swam amongst the fishies, and left the shore behind. Embracing the Azure, moving with the tide. And here I ...

Lama Tian Na... Incense rising, plooms of mantra. Taking flight with dusty wings, I soar through my primal thoughts. Om mae mae om... Arcane verses, repeated - eternal. Muttered with ...