kris

I have just finished this rough draft of chapter two. I plan on making the corrections to chapter one, and hopefully this chapter tonight :D This one is a little ...

Thank you very much for your critiques :D I am terrible with stuff like that >< USELESS! hehehe Oh btw Scasha. I was trying to make a metaphor for the ...

What a genuinely sincere poem! I love the iconography and your rhythm. But what I love most of all is the unexpectedness of it all! Very romantic ^^ I’d like ...

8/10 it is a cutesy take on something wholey uncute :P

a very short chapter indeed. only about 600 words. I am not the world's best author and this is all just for fun. So any advice or critique would be ...

I enjoyed the end, in particular :D Very frantic. I could imagine the situation very clearly...promise me one thing. Don't let the poor dogs be harmed. But nit-picky me :P ...

I move in favour of Scasha's suggestions. Very insightful indeed. Take heed child!! I personally found your story rather rushed, but i can see exactly what you were going for; ...

I am sorry about the fact that I cannot give you much in the way of grammar or punctuation correction, as I have difficultly with it myself :P so any ...

WEEEE! first post :D happy days. OK now! down to business :P I really enjoyed the imagery used within your poem, it was very evocative while managing to avoid being ...