kris

I gave it to my friend ( a serious, book buff & feelings hurter) hehehe - so i have done my best to fix my terrible punctuation. Please, please. read ...

Firstly - I need to admit that i am a sucker for free verse and progressive/ experimental anything i say is going to be bias. OK! I LOVED IT! :D ...

WELCOME!!! i am new to this site as well...I cannot keep away..*worries* A very pleasant read :D thank you for a nice way to spend 10mins. (hugs) You might want ...

Your writing is very interesting but it suffers from the same illness as my works...Run-on sentences hehehe - little blighters :P But stick with it; please. you have the seeds ...

As a drama student i must is very difficult to act. Almost as bad as a Dada or In'yer face theatre. It is not nice working with a script that ...

I can't say that i am a professor on American history. so i can't tell if the story is accurate...But i found it very easy to read. BEST THING! i ...

It is certainly progressive. :shock: I feel you have struck a chord. The humbly pastry is mentioned too scarcely in poetry! WHY?!?!?! hehehehe

Sorry if it is terrible - but it explains it'self. I sit and wonder how such things, As prose, and sonnets or musings, Can be styled from simple thought, Without ...

thanks for the giggle :D ...but i feel kind of sorry for that man, nobody likes losing money >.

I found you in fondest fields. Dancing transcendence, divine. With worries of ages bound to your spirit. Spun like silk of deepest black. Oh! supreme lover. Love this lonely and ...

Lovely imagery, but i can't shake the feeling i get that this is from a Dada play...very surreal *spaces out* Nice work, very thought provoking.

I can relate COMPLETELY! How very irksome.. eurgh :P Very sincere poem. and is that not what a poem is meant to be? Yes perhaps there are some problems with ...

I disagree. Anything that does not confirm and conclude the message of the piece at the end is useless. Otherwise your intention can be misunderstood. I think its a very ...

Branches of warped ivy cling, to the solemn azure steeple. Long since forgotten. Terrible neglect lets tiles, Shiver off the once beautiful dome. Twilight now broken, iridescent. They came from ...

You have such a skill with the craft of story telling. This was remarkably easy to read. My personal preference here: take it or leave it, it is completely your ...