kris

A very well thought out poem. Your clearly put a lot of time into your choice of words. The only problem is have with it, is that it does not ...

Firstly i must say. This is so emotive and touching. I was on the verge of tears toward the end, very very sad indeed. It was not clear that the ...

Arguably, not my best poem ever- but i really needed to express this thought. Blue skies and green beneath, but what belies is beyond belief. I have no borders or ...

BIENVENUE!! Welcome! now! let us begin. Firstly - well done, it was nice to read and you did not have too many "run-on" sentences (something i must admit that i ...

What excellent rhythm! and rhymes. really terrific. I only think it could have used some punctuation and that is it. Other than that, it was lovely. I particularly like the ...

I was Temporarily blind for just over 4 months, two years ago. When a coca-cola bottle exploded when i shook it up - the cap flew up rupturing my cornea ...

savage, steeple, sanctuary....mneh My Favorite = Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

A genuinely beautiful poem. You certainly have a way with words. I must second that which the post above mentioned. However - the end is practically taken from Romeo & ...

I drifted here from a foreign shore, my head a wash with forgotten lore. Rested in the ether among the stars, took a stumble, but fell too far. On and ...

oh my..i should really amend that typo :S am i allowed?

H'okay! It was a very good poem indeed, but i thought the rhythm was off at some points and the lack of punctuation was a bit of a problem. Why ...

There are many, that would agree with you. The thought and sentiment of the poem is the key aspect. alas, if it does not have some kind of basic structure ...

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Oh my giddy aunt. That was terrific! it was like an on-going poem...really beautiful imagery too...shit me! my heart is still racing from that opening. Makes me want to read ...

Have far have you read? what do you think of it - compared to Mr.Flemming's books?