kris

The foreboding clouds rumble. Mana from heaven. Blessings long awaited. Descend to the needy plateau. Drip. Splash. Drip. The parched earth drinks deep. Lapping with muddy tongues. The ancient dances ...

Well, one thing is for certain. You know how to write a poem well. for this - Kudos! :D *and my rarely seen tridecatople thumbs up*. However...the poem started out ...

I am not entirely sure, of what i think about this poem. Every fibre of my being, says no...but some obscure nymph; lurking in the depths of my mind says ...

ooooh my!! my oh my! how very spicy. sounds, somewhat bitter. But, forgive me. I am easily side-tracked. (my idle mind - serves me right for shopping at Tesco for ...

We have all, I'm sure felt bullied at some point. This is just a little poem, which tries to communicate some of the thoughts of feelings that one might have ...

I liked this poem. It was not enough to make me wet myself. However, a pleasent read none the less. My advice...hmm, well. The best advice i can give to ...

I think it is hard to make an ultra-short poem work well. This, i believe did work. So well done, on that part. It did have a definite pace and ...

I am obliged to agree with Eimear on this one. She has hit the nail on the head. You clearly have the knack for story-telling and description. However, this is ...

WOW! that was bleeding amazing! I am really, impressed. My favorite stanza was: Open the windows, air the smell of death off their sweaty skin, come on now, less of ...

I am not sure why, but there was such a deep atmosphere in this poem! while i read it, i could hear storm clouds in my head. Very surreal :P ...

Hi - i am only posting the first 400 words or so, because i am not sure whether or not it works, and i don't want to carry on down ...

I liked it. I am also, going to go against the flock to say: I think that your use of structure and stanza were very clever. The narration is from ...

Ok, this is all really useless without the score...which i don't know how to put up here. Trust me, it does fit into a ragtime beat. ~A new way to ...

Incredible. Very well thought out indeed. You have touched on a subject that is very sympathetic to those who will read it :P you sly fox. It reads, very smoothly. ...

A very poignant poem indeed. It left a lot of room for interpretation - i took the thought of the Irish immigrants in the 19th century immigrating to the Americas. ...