kris

WOW! this is such a beautiful poem, I honestly, really enjoyed reading this. The devices in your poem; where very well chosen - very evocotive. There weren't any grammatical or ...

First of all, i commend you for attempting such a short poem. I do despise excessively long poems >< hehehe ( and NO! it's not because I'm lazy >

I'm in some sort of Fuck up land Where atomic bombs are beautiful And hydrogen bombs are closer than they appear I hear some child whispering Heroin is good for ...

I wasn't terribly keen on this poem, if I am being honest. It lacked any definite direction or structure. the absence of punctuation, made for a irksome read. HOWEVER! You ...

How very passionate! You have definitely invested a lot of yourself into this isn't really an ode though (just to be an annoying cretin :P). You certainly have a good ...

Isn’t it funny how people can change? Long ago caring but now estranged. Taking no time in nailing your coffin, Spending time as small children laughing. Oh how did it ...

Most people think that it is the british ilse...We do get a lot of rain...but not the most! Papua New Guinea gets the most i think.

You know my opinions on this gaz :D but hey! i'll tell you again anyway. FOR THE WHOLE WORLD TO SEE! *thunder cracks ominously in the distance* I think your ...

Firstly, my dearest. WELCOME! welcome to our happy little community :D I that you really enjoy it here. OK LETS DO THIS THANG! I really liked the overall feel of ...

I found you in fondest fields, Now long since tired of dancing. In the midst of your perfection, I dream I am a bird. Singing your exhaled name. But stand ...

Over all an OK poem. I did not tier of it, nor did i wee myself with excitement :P You did manage to create a very solid sense of scene ...

Something about this poem, sits very well with me. It has a very charming innocence that is not hammered home again and again - which so many poems do; to ...

This is a very clean, elegant poem. I really liked it. It had a simplicity to it that i find really appealing. Very well done. ty kris x

I rather like this poem, even though i have an aversion to longer poems :P The subject matter was very appealing and it really amused me. More so given the ...

Words are mazes set in ink, born without bearings, thrown in the paper clink. Without a compass or a map, I endeavour to read, so oft’ snared in a trap. ...