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Thank you very much Claeren :D

Come on guys, any help? :P

I'm waiting... I'm waiting... I'm... Waiting for you to tell me something- anything. Anything to dispel this, malaise. I'm a stranger, even to myself. A shadow of a ghost... I ...

In my creative writing class today, my lecturer taught us about surrealist poetry. I've really started to enjoy this genre. I hope you like my first go at it. _____ ...

Hi, My friend recently passes away after killing herself. I've written this poem in memory of her, and as a way of facing up to how badly I treat her. ...

I can't tell you much about what they wore, but since semitic people have traditionally been herders, I'd say things made from wool. Food - wheat,fish and lamb. Building materials, ...

Not all Kings were absolute. In England Kings were tempered by a powerful council of barons, left over from the old Anglo-Saxon tradition of elected Kings. Later English Kings were ...

Which 5 places would you most like to visit? and why?

Hey guys, I've made most of the corrections that you suggested. :D Thanks a million. I've also posted the rest of the chapter, so if you would like to read ...

Firstly I need to give a great big thanks, to those who helped me with part 1 of this chapter. I've written the second half of this chapter know ^_^ ...

Hi guys. Thanks for the critiques, I really appreciate them. However, the commas are intended to be there. I placed them where I did as poetic devices. I wanted the ...

Shall we run away, in to the distance? Mark our route along the coast, through the ocean spray. Ought we to elope, in the deep of night? Away from all ...

Hey sweet-pea. What a lovely poem you have here, for 13 years old you certainly can write well. Alas, with all things gone and to come, there are flaws. *looks ...

Be still, proud thing that you are. Your mouth flails with plosive discords, subverting the wisdom you preach. How vile your contortions make you. Face turned a wicked crimson, Capillaries ...

Ty Angel ^^ you do dote on my ego so *blushes*.