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Right. This poem was OK, but there were some annoying flaws. I suggest you read this poem aloud or get someone else to read it to you. You'll find that ...

Hola my good sir. I loved your poem, I really did. Though I don't think it is to everyone's taste, which isn't a bad thing. Not everything can be. The ...

Thank you for your kind review. Though I am certain that there must be something[i] wrong with it. Please, anymore critique?

Love like a Moth. I have been dreaming unbroken, for the longest time. For as long Earth has spun, or all the points between each star. Of his voice that ...

Afternoon Olyver - haha. I must say that your poem was quite a stroke of wit. It amused me to no end - I guess it must be part of ...

Afternoon my friend, well afternoon for me - who knows what it is for you... I'm going to go with twilight. Hmmm...Anyway enough of my yammering, onto the critique. Overall ...

Hello there Miss Ching, firstly may I congratulate you on a - by in large, good poem. The imagery you used was very visceral and kind of cinematic, which I ...

Good morrow friend, and welcome to our society. I hope that you enjoy your stay. I really enjoyed your poem, it has a lot of lovely and interesting imagery and ...

Hey, I had amnesia ages back when I was 15. So I thought it might be useful for you to hear it from someone first hand. For me, I could ...

From what I know of Unicorns in myth, their anything but gentle. They were seen as savage, unbreakable beasts that could only be calmed by a virgin maiden. Also their ...

Awww what a lovely poem. It really was. It spoke of a sweet innocent love, that for me seems pretty remote these days haha. Much of the imagry was cliché, ...

Hello Ben, my name's Kris and I shall be your reviewer for today. ^_^ First of all, I think the message that you were trying to get across in this ...

Hola Baileyboo. You my dear, have the honour of being the first person I have critiqued on this site, for a year. So yes. :D haha Righto lets get stuck ...

Hey indie kid! Sitting at your computer screen, baring into a tungsten beam. Trying to do something obscene; wishing to be part of the scene. You want to be an ...

Hey I've had rather a long absence from writing, which is something I cannot say has been down to laziness - I have been trying but the words just weren't ...