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Re: Deeper Wounds [[Chapter 2]]
Hey, I caught some things that may help, I'm sorry if I sound harsh, I don't want to hurt your feelings. (: Hours later, I let myself in the house. ...
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Re: The Lake House/ Chapter 1 Part 1(Edited)
Thanks, everything helped. (:
May 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lake House/ Chapter 1 Part 1(Edited)
*I made some more improvements. Thank you for input!* Chapter 1: “Kal-” Mrs. Morrison skipped Kali and went to mine. “Kayden O’Connell?” “Here.” Kali has run off before, but not ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lake House/ First Chapter
Thanks a ton, again! (:
May 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lake House/ First Chapter
*I think I am submitting this right, help me if I'm not. (: * Name: Kayden Maline O’Connell Age: 22 Residence: Northbend, Washington This story is about my little sister, ...
May 30, 2010
