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Re: photo I took years ago
Okay, haha! I am new at this, (:
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: photo I took years ago
I took this photo when I went camping one year and I felt like posting it. (: This is my first photo I have posted, so I am sorry that ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Pieces of My Life
These are really cool. Nice job! Sorry, I don't know much about photography, (:
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 5)
Hello everyone! I don't know exactly what I should rate this since it has violence near the end of the chapter. Sorry that it is somewhat long, but I hope ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Unloved
Hey Kit! In this, I didn't find many flaws, except the part that was mentioned earlier. I love how you take the vampire and werewolf craze that's going on and ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: The Immortal Heart
Hey there! Today I am going to review everything by chapter. I'm sorry if I am harsh, I don't want to hurt your feelings, (: Editing will be in red. ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Tara -part 1-
Hey Purple, there is just some things I caught that could be edited. I don't mean to hurt your feelings in any way. (: Everything I write will be in ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 4, part two)
Hey again! This is the second part of my fourth chapter, hope you like it! (: Trenton stretched when the sun slowly started showing itself, reaching the ridge of the ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 4, part one)
Hey everyone who is reading, I split this chapter into part one and part two so that it would be easier to read. I hope you like it! (: Chapter ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 3)
Hey everyone! Again, this is my first attempt at writing fantasy, I hope you like it! Sorry that it is kinda long,(: Chapter 3, Remca: We left when it was ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 1+2)
Thank you! I will work on that, (:
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 1+2)
This is my first attempt at writing a fantasy, I hope you like it! I know it's kind of long, sorry about that. (: Chapter 1, Escape: I ran. Not ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: deleted.
I'm sorry, but this sounds awefully like the book Pretty Little Liars to me, as well as the new show coming out. Just a thought. (:
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: The Lake House/ Chapter 1 (Edited, again)
*This is the third edit, so I hope it's a big improvement. (:* Chapter 1: “Kal-” Mrs. Morrison skipped Kali and went to mine. “Kayden O’Connell?” “Here.” Kali has run ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Katie's Puddles
I love it! I can't wait to read more of it. (:
May 30, 2010
