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Hey Murray! I'm sorry, but I don't have much time to write a proper review, but from what I have read is that the format needs to be fixed. I ...

Hey Murray! I am here to review today! It's never my intention on hurting your feelings. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting Prologue I ran with ...

Ooops, sorry! I forget to mention that I liked where this was going. It really interested me to keep reading more of it. Bravo! (:

Thank you! (:

Hello Adeera! I am here to review today! I don't have any intention on hurting your feelings!(: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Pink- Highliting Green- Take out Prologue ”HIS name will ...

Hey everyone! I took these photos last summer on vacation to Glacier National Park. I hope you enjoy them! (: 1147.jpg 8b71.jpg 6407.jpg 0e33.jpg

Hey Everyone! I drew this when I went camping last year in Montana. To draw this, I took a stick and burnt the end and used that to draw with. ...

Hello Rachael June! (: See? I do know your middle name!(:

I know nothing about sketching and such, but I think this is really cool! (: Good job!

Hello Lavender! I am here to review today! Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highlighting ____________________ Chapter Two: Desolate Plains I ran down the dirt road, my flimsy ...

Okay, I read this again, and it is better than when I first read it. It seemed more realistic, and a good way to start this off. Let me know ...

Your welcome!

Hey Readers! I am sorry for the length. As you read on, I am referring to the continent where this is taking place as Arai. I didn't mention it earlier ...

Hello Pebbles! I am here to review! I have no intention of hurting your feelings. (: Red- Corrections Blue-Comments Green- Take out "You going to bed soon?" My mother asked ...

Hello Unique! I caught tons of punctuation errors. Red-Corrections Blue-Comments When Harri was born, she didn't cry, she didn't yell, she just lay there in the arms of the nurse, ...