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Re: The Pianist who played for the Moon Man
Wow! The painist is so cool looking!(: I'm not really an art expert, so I couldn't really give you anything else besides that they look really good.(:
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Amber
Hello!(: I don't know anything about poetry, but this was really good.(:
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 9 edited)
Hey everyone! I decided to rewrite chapter 9 and I hope it is significantly different from the unedited version. Sorry for length! (: Enjoy! Chapter 9, Blackness: My eyes shoot ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: sketches that I recently drew(:
Hello! I drew these sketches for the art contest at the local fair, but I still haven't chosen which one I want to enter. Let me know what you think! ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
Hello! I am here to review! It's never my intention to hurt any feelings!(: I caught many punctuation errors like Razzker said earlier. “Hi, my name is Seraphina. I am ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 9)
Thanks, I will probably rewrite this whole chapter anyway. I wasn't feeling to good about it. (:
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 9)
Hey everyone! Here is chapter 9, I hope you like it! I wasn't sure what to rate it, so I just rated it 12+. (: I'm sorry that it's kinda ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 8)
Thanks! (:
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 8)
Hey everyone! This is chapter 8! I hope you enjoy it! Chapter 9 will be up soon also!(: Chapter 8, Taken: Besides me, I could feel Trenton slowly relax, now ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: The Girl With The Cheetah Mark(Ch.1)
Hey Murray! I am here to review! Sorry it took me a while to review, I have been kinda busy. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 7)
Thank you! (:
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 7)
Hey Readers! Here is Chapter 7, I hope you enjoy it! This one isn't as long as my previous chapters.(: Chapter 8 will be up soon! Chapter 7 Alden: When ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 6)
Thanks! (: I will start doing some editing, (:
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: The Arrow Wielder (Prologue)
Hey! I am here to review!(: I don't mean to hurt your feelings. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting The streaming sound as the speeding arrow ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Whispered Strength Chapter 2
Hey Adeera! I am here to review! I have no intention on hurting your feelings!(: Red- Corrections Blue-Comments Green-Take out Pink- Highlighting CHAPTER 2 W hen the horses where in ...
Jul 20, 2010
