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Re: Chapter one Of Speechless
Hey, here to review! I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me.(: I'm not good at catching grammar mistakes, so I'm not going to focus on that. ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Movie you have seen...
Okay, I'm a HUGE fan of movies and films, so I decided to pipe in on this topic. I can't really say my ALL TIME FAVORITE movie because I don't ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Elle, Chapter 4 *Rewritten*
Hello, everyone. Hope you enjoy this chapter! Darkness still envelopes me. Stars shine brightly above. The river is hushed, only a background noise. Warmth and care are wrapped tightly around ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Elle, Chapter 3 *Rewritten*
Hello, Readers/Writers/Artists alike! Figured I would post this, give you something to read/critic/praise/etc. Hope you enjoy! This idea is one I have had for several years, so, yeah. Don't know ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2, Elle *Rewritten*
Hello, Readers! Here is chapter 2 of my rewrite. As I stated in earlier, I have completely rewritten everything, starting from scratch. So, enjoy!(: “You do not know about this ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Elle, Chapter 1 *Rewritten*
Hello everyone! I have decided to completely rewrite all of Elle from scratch. I have changed a lot from the first one. So, I hope you enjoy!(: Chapter 1: I ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Everlasting War: Pre-Recorded Times Chapter 1
Hello! Here to review!This is the first review I have done in a while, so I'm a little rusty.(: I say this to everyone: If I hurt feelings, I'm sorry. ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: The Other Side of the Fire
Hello! Here to review. There really isn't much to review, but oh well!(: Kathy walked out of the movie theaters This should be "theater" in a crying rage. As she ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Nine O'Clock
Hello YWS-ers! This is for school and we only had today to write it. I thought it was interesting, so I thought why not post?(: Have fun reading! I flip ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 15)
To all who have been reading and following this story, I apologize. I have been experiencing MAJOR writer's block and haven't had much inspiration to write Elle. I have been ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: The Plague
Hello! I have short amount of time to review, so I will keep it short and sweet! Also, I have no intentions of hurting or damaging feelings. I'm sorry if ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Spring
Well, I think you did a really good job on this poem.(: Everyone before me already corrected any mistakes, so I don't have anything else to add. Again, good job.(:
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Perishers quick doodle :o)
Hello, this photo really needs to be resized. I can't view it since it's so big.(:
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hello, I'm here to review!(: Okay, just informing you, it's very important to research, research, and research more about WWII. It's always important before writing a historical novel, you want ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Pacific
My camera (my phone actually) shrunk it, so that's why it has the feminine look to it. :\ But, yeah, I get what you mean. I did use pencil since ...
Feb 13, 2011
