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Faking the smile that isn't there For someone who doesn't care When alone, can't help but cry Because of the pain you caused inside Through with listening to your guiltless ...

I really like this poem. It is short and sweet, but says a thousand words. I like the way you expressed yourself, and in so few words. Thaks for sharing

I liked your poem, but the who oa was a little sidetracking. Other than that it was really good. Thanks for sharing

Don't want to drown, no one is ever around. I can't fight this feeling anymore, don't want to get stuck in this war. Unless I know it's worth fighting for, ...

Faking the smile that isn't there For someone who doesn't Even care When alone, cant help but cry Because the pain you caused inside Through with listening to your guiltless ...

this is a really good piece your a good writer

Only a fool would say he's wise while the wise man stays humble

Feeling the pain of death that never dies. Hearing the sounds of a million cries. The truth hidden within your eyes. under all the horrible lies. Eating away your precious ...

Feeling the pain of death that never dies. Hearing the sounds of a million cries. The truth hidden within your eyes. under all the horrible lies. Eating away your precious ...

That was good