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I agree that the last sentence isn't the best... but I really like the poem itself. It's very emotional. Great job!

Overall, I really liked this poem. You do need to go back and fix your grammar and spell I with a capital letter. I like the rhyming, but the rhyme ...

This was amazing! I love the writing style, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep writing!

I liked this poem a lot! It is very emotion stirring. One thing is the repetition in the first two lines. I like repetition, but I don't think it works ...

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My best friend is a snowman. I made him just last night. With a hat and carrot nose, that suit him just right. I think he must be sleeping, Or ...

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First off, what's a movie house clock? It was interesting and I liked the twist at the end. Keep writing!

I'm going to have a tea party, As far as the eye can see. We'll all meet in Boston, And have a jubilee. The ship sails in from England's ports, ...

Zuko He pulled his hand away, and the knife just missed it. He stood up angrily and snarled at the man, "What are you doing?!"