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This is not a poem you read everyday, I found a message about peace and living in harmony in it. In the first two lines, the rhyme seems effortless, but ...

This is really long! :D Autumn leaves are falling, whirling spiraling down. Only to be tugged by wind, before they touch the ground. Trees are explosions of color Everyday shorter ...

Hi, I really enjoyed your poem, it really speaks to me. I liked how you described a beautiful part of the rose, and then an horrid part. I understood how ...

This is very touching. It reminds me of when I was little with my dad. I think you did a great job showing the character's personalities through simple conversation. Also, ...

This is a very pretty picture. I always love pictures of flowers!I have only one major critique. From a photographers point of view, usually you don't want your subject right ...

A sliver of silver, a river of light. I thought this was a great visual image. It makes a real catching beginning! I loved how you ended it, I could ...

I agree that the underlined words were annoying, but other than that, it was a fantastic piece! I liked how the autioneer talked with an accent, kind of a drawl. ...

This is a really great poem! Tell your friend she is awesome. I especially liked the continuous correlation between two lines throughout the poem. A lot of times I see ...

The real me I hide Noone sees inside past the mask I wear I really couldn't care to trust is to be hurt noone sees I'm weak Noone sess my ...

Thanks so much!

I thought this was a beautiful poem, it almost made me cry. I think it was very well written. I only have one critique. Throughout the whole poem, you kept ...

The stuff in all caps is lyrics. This is my first play... It's not real good. Critiques welcomed!!! Blooming in May Act I Scene I CAST: Margaret (aka Meg) (12-14) ...

Thanks everyone. Just to be clear, Corren and the guards are human. I don't think that was clear in the story. I used a lot of simalies with birds, so ...

I liked this a lot. It's very mysterious. I would love to read more of this story. The present tense gives the story an interesting dimension. I loved the ending, ...

I know this is kind of short... Chapter One; Corren The blanket of fog over the port was the early grey of dawn. The air hung heavy with moisture, clammy ...