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**I don't have a problem with swearing, I find it quite funny when people use a random curse and I only understand the literal meaning :p But saying 'kokes' on ...

You guys made a storybook and forgot to tell me? Can I be part of your storybook, can I, can I? But you'd have to spam me to remind me ...

Haha I love it. You've used a good old classic style that I haven't seen in a long time. I have to disagree with Suzanne though, I think home and ...

Her cheeks are what?? I really liked your descriptions at the beginning and your references to art, but I have to agree with Angel. The imagery was great, but I ...

Ello! Hmm... Sorry, but the first thing that came to mind when I read this was Green day. It's probably an odd coincidence, but you should look up the song ...

Hola I really like this, it's a brilliant description, especially of something as simple as crossing the road. The whole 'dog *** and marajuana' thing caught me off guard. I ...

From glancing at this I'd say there's little poetry in it, with or without the translation. I'll admit I really enjoyed working it out though, that was a lot of ...

I love this! I can't really find anything wrong in it. You've brought the characters to life brilliantly. I love how each character is outwardly stereotypical, but you've given them ...

Erm... I'm not really sure how to take that critique. I don't actually understand half of what you've said... It also seems like you haven't understood half of the story ...

The prologue -

I quite like this. It's interesting to see the point of view of the bad guy. I like the way you've made him confess about feeling guilty, even though he's ...

I don't fully understand why you've split the lines the way you have, but I like it. I have to agree the break between the first and second paragraph is ...

I love this poem. It's interesting the way you have described silence, as something that can actually get louder. 'Nature tries to nurture it's damaged children', this line is brilliant. ...

Solo?? It took until the creature lunged at me to decide it wasn't very friendly. I dodged out the way and moved as fast as I could to avoid its ...

Title: Fairy Dust Changeling - One raised among Humans The Beginning - Because of the number of homes and habitats being destroyed by the humans, many mythical creatures where starting ...