kogarasumaro143

Excellent description of a Griffin. You made it as a symbol of bravery, intelligence, positive output in life, and sense of responsibility. Those qualities that we people should also possess. ...

Nice one. I love this poem. Suggestion: You can change this line Eyes see me, to Eyes are watching. Maybe you wanted to emphasize that people are watching you. :| ...

Great write! :D You're painting a picture of the world where PEACE rules. Nice perspective as a writer. Also, in the last line especially this part, "Who would I be ...