kogarasumaro143

Its my first time to encounter this kind of sc-fi. Great! I like it. Its undeniably unique... GREAT write. "Ten..." I wanted to be a starpilot when I was a ...

Its pretty and cute. Every emotion you set on stage was in detail. Keep it up. You are in the right track. Dark clouds hover above my head I feel ...

hey this poem is really good Not too long not too short =) I agree! Its not to long to be bored and not to short for senseless ideas. Its ...

Amazing. I didn't expect that the flow will be like that. Maybe its my first time to read a story where a dragon is not dependent to his master and ...

Are you trying to show why it is very hard to be an adult or maybe a teenager? Well, you met what is needed. You precisely paint the picture of ...

:D :D :D Teens could relate to what you are saying for we are vulnerable to such inhumane "punishment". Well organize with respect to the flow of your poem. Nevertheless, ...

Awesome! I am fond of drawing swords especially katanas (even I can't really draw that nice). Well, what software are you using in making your 3D sword? Is it very ...

Welcome! ENJOY YWS!! don't forget to review ever work.. hehehehe :D :D :D

ABSOLUTELY!

How touching the poem of yours can be. *teary eyes* You achieve the level wherein you touch some hearts of your readers. Again, as what I also tell to others, ...

@Flower~Child: *smiles* Thanks anyways. Ok, I will remove that phrase. And about your question, why do I write this if i don't like to write poems, is that I only ...

@Flower~Child: Yah! you're right, that I need to put more background about my poem but I will just leave it like that. Thanks!! I will have it edited!

*shock with awe* WOW! As it was I am with your trip. It makes me float for a moment and hallucinating the beauty of your own world. Little twist and ...

@fatimah: Thanks!

Another poem. Still I wrote this a last year. I find it bad. Its up to you guys to have a review on it. Enjoy! 8) Darkness is only a ...