kogarasumaro143

Wow... Nice.. Even the poem of yours ended the way you want to end it, I can figure out that its not finish and you might probably add something. Overall ...

Nice.. Yet you have some lapses in your spelling. See this one: I Spy. A juvenile game of seek and find. Juvenile, yes, but then... let's play a round. Just ...

I hate to read LONG poem... Just by scanning and skimming it, i looks nice... :D 8) :) :o :shock: :wink: :mrgreen: I carry all my burdens, my omens and ...

CAn be! :?: :?: :?: Come one, come all, I'm having a ball. I roll on dry leaves and crusted chestnuts. With white, scraped arrows on black cotton streets, I'm ...

Great! Very interesting and I like it.. keep up the good work.. I remember that day,  The day you wisked my heart away, I had never felt this way before, ...

Elegance! This is the framework of your poem... Uniqueness in the sense of presenting wind in a metaphorical way. and Greatness for which I refer to the ideas of yours. ...

So, metaphorical... I like it... I sit and stare. I don't care, If its just a flick of your hair, Or muffled words that you share. Your hazel eyes, ordinary ...

Historial poetry?? Hmmm... nice for it is my first time to read like this.. Great! Large shoes stamp the street, I’ve never worn boots before, my feet feel heavy. “Here ...

@Flower~Child and bluewaterlily: "heart of space" is also the same if we say "heart of emptiness"

Hmmm... I see this as too traditional YET very nice... Remember the days, when we would dress up for fun, And when we would hold hands, With everyone. The days ...

@Adeera: Thanks.. Hehehe. I just don't know how to express myself.. Exactly, that's what I want to impart to.

At first I see this poem pure of LOVE but when I finished reading, it is no love, IT IS LUST! ahahahaha... great twist! Please comment and critique..... When I ...

Great and interesting kind of poem! Really feel the pain and all the emotions you have. Literally, I felt it. SO consider my suggestions Sadness utterly my own Only I ...

I love it! You're different in writing poems about love for you showcase it as Love in the darker side. To what love should not be for love is the ...

Hey! I like the topic! An android made for mass destruction? Hmmm, interesting... I am a man made of metal, created to survive. A secret weapon, at a secret base. ...