kogarasumaro143

My verse from a track off my EP. When we first me I knew it was magic, A year plus later, baby you still my habit, But now it's gettin' ...

The blood of my children is smeared on my hands. Hera, divine and cruel. You will not rest until my body is frozen, grounded and gone. Until you hear my ...

Welcome people!! And to the new members welcome.,... You can see my profile and review some of my works. If you wanted to, you can also send me a message ...

A poem of greatness or what may have you. Nice, Great, Excellent and what not. Only I can say, try to check every spelling of the word for it makes ...

Gee! What a poem.. Hehehe... Great!! Open doors: shattered windows, Careless whispers fill the pillars. Here we are together, with each other thats all we need. Find yourself, take your ...

LOVE IT! Excellent Infinity: Hugging every single star in the universe in one giant grip --squeeze-- and then kissing their foreheads good morning. Hinting a single smile to the one ...

Great! Even the story is very short yet it drives me to feel good. It touches my heart, a little bit, because experience really creates an advantage in writing like ...

I like this poem yet it troubles me in the last stanza. Still it is a great poem... do more writing.. Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the ...

nice! keep it up. This a mobile pantoum, and I hope you like it. Wishing on stars for you. Hoping and praying because You need to stay longer. All I ...

WOw! Nice representation... Hope you will agree in some of my suggestions. A rope, A gun, poison or knife , PLEASE, observe parallelism Whatever was needed to take my life. ...

can I just be an audience??

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Oh my! I can sense a feeling of rejection here. Its good that I understand how you feel. HOWEVER, this poem can be more effective if you polish some words ...

=( huhuhu... What a sad little earth are you portraying man!! Still I love it,, My first-ever attempt at a string of haikus, so please tell me if I messed ...

ahahahaha!! Nice one. Whats your motivation in writing this kind of cute, little, funny poem??? ahahahaha... It really sucks my brain. However, you might need some polishes in it. Inconsistencies ...