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Hello, Silent Rain! First of all, I am no poet, and of course I know I have made mistakes, but I think there are some things that you may have ...

Blood- Red Moon I’ve cut out my heart, With you in its inside. All your face, and my dreams, and your eyes and our fears Went away, never will come ...

Hey, Pink! Good storyline, it really makes you want to read more and more. For me, it was a bit like Twilight- having the mysterious, beautiful, strange boy of whom ...

Hi Pink! Thanks for your review! I've corrected the mistakes that you mentioned, I hope there isn't much more left :). As for the descriptions, the story continues in Sunshine ...

Hi Megsug! Thanks for your review! I've tried to make the story more understandable by adding a few lines here and there, and of course tried to correct the mistakes ...

Sunshine Boy (or Pudding Girl 2) The girl got off the tram. Her large, purple coat was flying in the chilly wind across her. She pulled it tighter around herself ...

Hi! Nice story, interesting turn when the girl wakes up as an actual woman. Spelling was generally OK, except for a few "to" instead of "too" and stuff like that, ...

Hey there! I just thought i'd do a review of your drawing, since i draw pretty much myself :) Your picture is very interesting, i think it gives back the ...

Pudding Girl The boy got on the tram. He carried his sporty rucksack with him, which barely contained more than a piece of ragged paper and a pen, since he ...

Author's Note: I forgot to mention it in the first chapter, but this is the first draft. Critiquing is very much appreciated. :] Also, this is essentially a flashback (except ...