klotrox16

Thank you so much! I agree my rhyme was off, but I tried. Not to spoil it all for you, but what the poem is about is when I was ...

Note: I edited the lines Renn commented on above a little so it makes more sense :)

My cloudy little island, I write to you in shame It's been awhile, I'll admit, and there's not much to say... My cherry blossoms whisked away in a stroke of ...

I love how you make the butterfly the centerpiece. HAving the background be simple and uncolored is great. IT brings the focus to the main piece. The colors are vivid ...

I love how you tie the beginning of the poem back at the end with the essential message you wanted to get at.

Lovely connotations for the word "black". I think you have a good thing going here and your reference to writing and art flow beautifully. It's very easy to grasp but ...

The writing is good. It may not make sense to alot of the people reviewing it, but it makes sense to me.

This is beautiful, and though a little over my head I think I understand. It's about all the baggage we leave behind. A little bit at least. The gorilla is ...

Your spelling leaves a little to be desired but I really feel you captured the essence of comedic hatred without being cliche. Well done!

It's a little rough I have to admit. You seem to change themes within the first two stanzas. Other than that you seem to make your point. Review it and ...

Beautiful work. I love ho you're initially talking as if to children. Keep it up!

Why thank you. This is the first story I've finished in a very long time. I just got back into writing after a very long hiatus so I thank you ...

The Promise of a Dream She asked me to give her a reason. I couldn’t answer. Instead I stood on the cracked pavement outside of my house and stared at ...