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Re: Autumn
I like it, it doesn't have a set rhythm, but thats ok. Although the definition of poem says it has to follow a set rhythm, I like poems that don't ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Secret Life
Wow I really like it! It didn't have much of a rythm, but I don't think poems have to have a rythm. I really liked it :D
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: All Alone
I like it, I like it. There was no spelling or grammar mistakes (better than I could do). But I think it would be better if you made it into ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for having more stars than me AND posting the same time as me!
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Fresh off the Griddle
cool! what is it? An orky thing? It's cool. :D
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for making it cold and windy
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Follow me
Yeah I was bored and had nothing to do. I know it has no punctuation and grammar, please don't bug me about it. YAnd I know it doesn't rhyme. Come ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Oh I love those smilies! :smt026 The elephants are cool too though. :elephant: And welcome to everyone too! :D
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Wow it's ME!
Um me, yeah... I'm Ari, 13, year 8, blah blah blah. I don't know where I was born, but I think it's somewhere in Aus, where I live know. I ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Dear Mum
So sweet :smt054 You should show her! at least your mum is cool, wish I could say the same for mine. At least I have a good cuz hehe :P
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Hmm... me
Ha your life is not boring! More intresting than mine... Are you really teaching yourself Spanish? Could have told me :P You were born in England? Wow I didn't know!
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: How You Break My Heart (Chapter 1)
Hehe brings back memories... I like it, although the first half was better. And how did they get a letter if he only left like ten minutes ago? that bit ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Sister of Mine
Wow, I like it! A bit confusing, I thought her twin was looking in a mirror or something! The first bit could be a bit better although it's already cool. ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: How You Break My Heart (Chapter 2)
Hey I like it! :) but Ginger is right, that bit about weekends and jail got me confused. I still like it though!
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: I've done it!!!! :)
Good for you! i hate writers block, but months, wow! That would be teribble! Good that your back writing again :)
Sep 24, 2007
