kittykat

I just made this up right now and thought I should post it. It's not that great, tell me what you think of it! I haven't written a poem in ...

What was up with the random capital letters? It was okay, not really great. Still, I liked it. :D

I liked it, so wait... The angel burned to dust and you were crying, but then in the end the angel is flying again? Wait...what?

I felt like trying something new. I have posted a different story, but the main character is telling it. There’s a narrator in this one. I hope that you like ...

No!!! It ended!! No! Keep going! I want to read more! *sobs* This was so good, I couldn't find any errors or spelling mistakes. Keep me posted when you post ...

Hi! Cool avatar.. Any questions or just want someone to talk to? PM me! :D

Hello. Basically everyone here would be happy to help you. PM me whenever! :D

Any questions you have just come to me or anything else! Everyone's really nice, so you can ask anyone anything you feel like about YWS. :D

This was so good... How will I critique this when I have no words to critique it with? I didn't see any errors, but of course I might have over ...

I love it. This is the goriest story here that I've found on YWS. You have great detail and it's not rushed at all. A suggestion that I have is ...

uh ya... where are they in the first place? at school? tell more about the charecters, and by the way...you spelt warm wrong. you spelled it "worm." this is really ...

Ya! I'm the first one to review!! :D This one is better than the first chapter for sure! But you need to remember to put spaces between the paragraphs, which ...

Hmm.. This is really good. :D A lot of excellent discription and not rushed at all. I'm just wondering what's up with the tiny writing. Not that I can't read ...

uh...ya.. I can't really find the words to describe how bored I was with this piece of work. I'm really dissapointed actually. :( you put, "Perhaps I good carry it ...

at least this one was better than the part 1...wasn't it? thanks for all the advice everyone! :D I'm going to try to make every next part a little bit ...