kittykat

I tried to get my fixes in red, but it didn't work. You'll have to look for them. :D It wasn't that bad for your first attempt Lulu. This was ...

This was awesome, but sort of weird... which makes it awesome! There should be more stuff like this. :D

[Leyshon Blodwyn] He nodded his head. "I see," The powder monkeys were still fighting over the gold coins. Leyshon headed towards then and swooped up the coins. "Get that wound ...

*does his name sound French?* [Leyshon Blodwyn] He tilted his hat back up so he could see where he was going. The girl's side was still bleeding, even though her ...

This was really good, especially the part when you mentioned how long he's been playing the violen. I didn't find a grammer errors, hope I get to see more of ...

[Leyshon Blodwyn] A couple of the powder monkeys threw a corpse overboard near Leyshon. There was a girl there too, it was odd to have a girl pirate. Her side ...

because it's easier to make square boxes instead of round why don't cats like water?

yay!

I would get over the fact that they can't see me and have fun haunting them. BOO! What would you do if you were watching TV one day and then ...

This was... scary, but I couldn't stop reading it! It was really good! I couldn't find any grammer errors. As some of the people have said, I think you could ...

banned for being older

banned for taking the Light Side's cookies

Can I call Lilith? :D

*I'm not sure where I'm supposed to be, so... I'll just be standing around on the deck. Sorry it's so short!* [Leyshon Blodwyn] The sea was quiet, people were hurrying ...

*cat4prowl, her name is Giovanna . It end with and a , not an i * [Giovanna] She ran out of the car and into the house. Viola was thrashing ...