kittykat

Weren't you there when we crowned you the Ultimate Plate and Soda bringer?

[James Underwood] "No, no, it was my fault." James pulled his jacket around tighter. "You need to get inside, it's cold..." he laughed. "Well, I guess that was pretty obvious..." ...

people

[James Underwood] He hopped out of the back a few seconds before Ray actually stopped the car. Everyone leaned out of the windows, asking him if he was okay. James ...

This was good, sorry for the short critique I'm about to give. Well, actually, that "this was good" was sort of it... :D I liked how you introduced Tobias and ...

*Sure Rory, I was hoping someone would would be her. It'll be funner since I won't know what she'll do next! :D*

*Oh yeah! I almost forgot to say, but I'm leaving to Indonesia on June 8th and won't be able to come to YWS for about 2 months, so... You can ...

[James Underwood] Jayleen didn't answer. Just then, the bell of above the door jingled. A group of girls walked in, all hudling for warmth. "It's cold out there! Can't we ...

Oooh!... I like it. ^_^ There's was practically nothing that I didn't like about it. Maybe that, "I giggled," part, it sort of bothered me for some reason. I'm not ...

[James Underwood] The rest of the day passed by quickly. There was two other classes he and Jayleen were in together, but not a word passed between the two other ...

Happy one year closer to death! ...er, I mean... Happy Birthday Nate! :)

Happy YWS Birthday Chocoholic! Here's your present! :birthday: and... this one too! :smt117 :smt116 - kittykat *can't wait for own YWS birthday*

[James Underwood] Okay, you can't be like this! his thoughts shouted at him. Stop being moppy! Get over it! Talk! Do something! Stop slouching! People are noticing it! James nodded ...

I'm going to point out the grammer errors first. ^_^ My corrections and comments will be in bold since the colors hate me. Why did he do that? Why,why, why??? ...

Ninja pirates Why is it so hard for me to right with my left hand?