kittykat

Hello, silver ^^ I really liked this poem, especially how it started out with "Lithe form." Maybe it's because I've always liked the word lithe for some reason. There was ...

First off... Hi and welcome to YWS! :D --- --- --- --- Grammar Claire and Maggie clenched their teeth, burying their faces deep into their coats; it was the second ...

S'up, Mike, Um, I don't know what else to put other than this was pure awesomeness! ^^ Sorry, no real critique here to give you. This was my favorite part, ...

Hello, Colleen! I'm sorry if this review won't be much help to you in advance, by the way. :) A few days ago I was planning on doing something that ...

Yes, you interpreted great ^^ [Tash M. Grevette] "Yeah, you do know," I said once we stopped, "Who were those people on the outside? What're they talking about? Monsters and---" ...

[Tash M. Grevette] " My kind!" I raised an eyebrow, Were all the rich this emotional about it? I sure wouldn't be if I was loaded. Isabelle glared at me ...

Yays! First here! :D Okay, first off I really like the idea of this story and how she has an imaginary friend, the therapist, and the fact that her sister's ...

[Tash M. Grevette] "Ah, that's speaking," I sat on the floor and watched as William struggle to help Joshua across the hallway. Why was I going to help that? Okay, ...

[Tash M. Grevette] "Maybe it'll be more," I chose my word carefully, "comfortable... if I'm at your height," From leaning on the wall I sunk down to the wooden floors ...

[Tash M. Grevette] "I..." His voice cracked. "You?" William shrunk back and tensed his shoulders like a soldier ready for battle. I stepped forward and looked down at him, looming ...

[Tash M. Grevette] "Isabelle," I called down the hallway, staggering to stand up, "Never mind, I know where you probably are! Mr. Escort's room, I suppose?" The little boy, William, ...

*Incog, you sneaky devil you... ^^ [ Rello Firan ] "Maybe that lollipop got to you," Rello flopped down onto the small couch behind him, eyeing Jesse. "How do you ...

Hello, elijah! ^^ Okay, maybe it was just me, but some things about this piece really made me sigh and take back my original thoughts on it. The first sentence, ...

I want to come on time, but I'm always confused by those Pacific or Central thingies. >< Where does Texas fall into those catigories? - kittykat

*I did want to create a character, but I don't think I have any time with all these projects my teachers piled on me. Vet, you can go ahead and ...