kitrosemon13

This was cute, I liked it. It was down to the point, the whole poem though did seem to lack something important. I get the idea of love, but I ...

Thank you to all who reviewed this! (:

First of all I'm sorry for your loss. I lost someone very dear to me and I too was in love with him. This poems had so many emotions and ...

This is going to be one of my entry's for the scholarship essay and art, tell me if it's okay. (: Alone in a world so unforgiving, losing all that's ...

Hello! I'm be reviewing your work today. (: One of the things I love about poems is that they have meaning. Yours did have meaning but I felt you expressed ...

okay, so if you've been keeping up with the updates on my page you'll see that I said I was working on a new novel! Well I don't have much ...

First and formost; WELCOME TO YWS! It's a blast here. A few pointers here, just skim over this to see what corrections I made to your poem. (: Lying on ...

In a pale room, freezing temperatures drop. I'm scared and alone, I keep hearing sounds. Let me introduce you to my world, voices from the underground are under my skin. ...

This poem is beautiful, it flows nicely but I think it doesn't have to much imagery as I was imagining it would have. Though that is not always a problem ...

Betrayed I begin to type away my feelings, my pencil breaks and my heart is reeling. This is all because of you, you were my reason, my answer, my means. ...

Well, to tell you the truth this poem didn't give me much to work with. The title says it 'That was how he died' you didn't go into much detail ...

Gay means happy, gayish (happy)

To make this intro short, these are three poems linked together. Dedicated to my love, my friend who has died, and for the future of my life with him. I ...

I didn't look at any other comments posted above me because I want to see your mistakes first hand. So if someone already told you this, SORRY! (: Well here ...

I love your writing but this relates to me more than any of your other works I've read! My favorite stanza is [i] Don’t steal all my sunshine, Or hide ...