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Re: Somewhat Of A Rap Song
Hey, it's M. I made this song with my cousin a few days ago, and it's like a rap song but not really. Anyway, we all have things we go ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: A Fire Rising
In most poems I read, I do not feel what the writer is portraying. This poem however, is just the kind of feeling I do think of most of the ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Laughter Of Horses
I hear outside my window, rain drops falling from the sky. I look back at the past and think, and I wonder, always wondering why. I hear I car outside ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: jealousy
Nice poem, it makes me feel like I am speaking this. Because this is how I feel when my more worse emotions get the best of me. Keep writing. -M.H. ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Centipede.
I enjoyed reading this, I could tell that you DID have emotion when writing this. But you might not want to space out so many times, and make sure when ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Just Like That
Just like that my dreams come and go, oh wonderful, I just wish you'd know, how much I love you, more than words could describe. Is it not funny, the ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello everyone, I've been a member for a while now, about a month tops and I was wondering if any of you more known writers could take a look at ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: James
That a nickname everyone calls him, and I thought Jimmy rhymed with that part of the poem.
May 9, 2010 -
Re: A Word of Wisdom
I really enjoyed reading this poem,this really expresses a lot of emotion, and it shows how I (the reader) feels about the world. Keep writing (: -M.
May 9, 2010 -
Re: James
There is a first time for everything. Everything is what I see when I look at you. As if I am not perfect enough for you, you still talk to ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
I'm starting to get the hang of things around here, I've posted quite a few things and I was wondering if any one would comment on my new poem 'Is ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Is Anybody Out There ?
I breath in, hoping that I'll breath in air. Of course I don't, I never do. Time and time again I feel sick, like there is not enough blood going ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: I picked up the cam when I was bored late in the night
I love writing poetry, and taking pictures of things aswell. Your pictures are truly something interesting to look at! (:
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey there !Can anyone give me reviews on my poetry ? Thank you !
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Silent Fury
School again. No one talks, but someone always listens. They listen to the wrong things, always. Even though suicide may be an option, not for me. This love, this hate, ...
Apr 28, 2010
