kitrosemon13

Some say they are muscle, and some say they are bone. From the mear fragment of our past lives... we are all ashes, from fire. Ashes from the Earth. Chapter ...

I loved your title, thats what drew me into this. I liked it a little though, this poem did not do anything to my emotions to say the least. The ...

You captured me by your title. Now normally when I see a poem this long I'd most likely skip over it. But this, my friend, is what poetry is! I ...

I was not feeling this poem very much, it was lacking some sort of awe I was looking for. Most likely because I am a huge vampire fan and I ...

Stab me with a knife, through the heart! Then maybe I'll die, but now since I'm alive my choices are deprived. I thought I knew you, you gave me a ...

Yes, well their is no children out at night. It was the grass on the ground that I was speaking of.

You have a very unique way of writing short poems, this one by far is my favorite that I have read from you. (: keep Writing. -M. H. Darling

I liked this poem, but I feel it was lacking something important. Try to make it longer maybe.

In the wind we play, wreathing in the air. Our friends, the clouds, make faces at us as they look us down. We move in circles, you can hear our ...

I wonder if the world will ever see me for me, or even for who I am becomming. I don't want them just to see my face, or even my ...

I wake up from a dream, what a good dream it was. I am living in the city that never sleeps, but I sleep. Thoughts run through these walls like ...

Well in saying the word 'democracy' and 'dictators' I mean't to say how goodbye is a word everyone is forced to say. I'll add that in so it can make ...

This pain is so much for someone so young, these thoughts have ran through my head for so long. Now they are longing to be free, I am ready to ...

Some say they are muscle, and some say they are bone. From the mear fragment of our past lives... we are all ashes, from fire. Ashes from the Earth. Chapter ...

Some say they are muscle, and some say they are bone. From the mear fragment of our past lives... we are all ashes, from fire. Ashes from the Earth. Chapter ...