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Re: Undying Love
Forever is an understatement, love is just a small piece of my feelings for you. Drugs are useless for you keep me at a high forever. All I need is ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Forgive and Forget
I cannot think of a time when I did not hate, when people only truly thought of others race. It's sickness to believe people can live in peace, but I ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Hey, Evi! Wow, I'm a huge fan of google, lol. This poem is so true that I'm still smiling from reading this. And like a few said though, it seems ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Thoughts
When you think during the day, you dream about what you see. When you wake up in the wee hours of morning, you cannot remember your dream. I think about ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Never Left
My heart is stone, my blood runs cold. I miss you, I need you. My mind is blank, I cannot think. I miss you, I need you. My life is ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Let Us Write
No, I wrote this by myself. (: I do not copy others, I think it is a bit trashy.
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Let Us Write
Let us write a melody and sing it together in song, Let us move to a new beat and then dance along. We shall write a sonnet an ode to ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: A Simple Life
Back when my life was simple, I had no care in the world. When everything had a low price, and old men weren't always attracted to little girls. Back when ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Puppy
I like the idea of this poem, but I do not like that you have no punctuation whatsoever. Here is something that caught my eye off the bat: I wrapped ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Writing on my walls
Hello! A few things I want to tell you about the poem is, I love how you bold the words I sort of get a good description of what you ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Genie In A Bottle
Give me three wishes, I know you cannot deny. Take me to a room of lights, and food and drinks of all delight. Shoot me towards the moon, so I ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Let Go
Over the years I've counted, my loses and I've lost my will. I refuse to fight over something that's right, so I just leave my suffering with sleeping pills. I'd ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Luna Italy
Yes, I am sorry for that aswell. I did not have much to work with when I spoke of Italy. I am planning a visit there next year.
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Luna Italy
As the waves run laps upon the shore, the sky is bright as light. So lovely and so pure. There is love in the air. There is a home everywhere, ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Lost Eyes
thank you, I suppose the balloons part is confusing. Sorry for that, I merely men't people only look at the size of things.
Jun 10, 2010
