kitrosemon13

I'm not a total fan of Haiku's but I liked one in particular. Rushing Water Rivers wind through hills Rushing water 'round the bends Twisting and turning I liked this ...

Luna, oh luna, my beautiful queen of the night. The stars that shine above you, the stars the shine below aren’t as bright. As I compare you to the winter ...

love is a rollercoaster(: thank you for the review though.

Then comes the faultless one, His countenance like the sun's warm glow. He is willing to pay the price For the fields of weeds you sow. Will you accept the ...

Deceiving eyes deceitful lies, What’s left of our selves is nothing more than our imagination. We pleaded with each other not to walk away, But when the words came out ...

The thing I love about poetry is that it tells a story. It could be either a sad or happy, a beautiful to horrid, ect. Your poem had beauty in ...

Welcome to YWS, river! I'll be your reviewer for today (: First of all we'll have to work on your use of punctuation and capitalization. You don't need to capitalize ...

Nicely written. First off first, I refuse to read what others have posted on ANYONE'S work so if you read something that someone else put, sorry! (: Let's start with ...

Sorry about the confusion, I should have put in there that my PC shut down on further writing of mine for my work on this. So sorry about that, I've ...

Wow, first is first. Congrats on making this the almost best piece of work I've read. This had so much imagery, I felt like I was there in your dream. ...

Nicely written, I did feel the pain that you are portraying as I read through this. I wrote a poem semi close to this so I know what you're going ...

Only one bite can suspend you from death into eternity. Only he could have saved me from this life, since he did I am changed, from something plain, into something ...

Hello there, I hardly ever look at anyone else's reviews on anyone's work so forgive me if I'm repeating what they say. (: Now for the overall body of your ...

Thank you to all who reviewed this, you all helped a lot.

Life as I knew it is gone, Flew by so fast way past the stars. You took my heart, You kept me whole now I’m broken, withered and old. We’d ...