kite1992

Hi :D I too have a poem :D

I hope you guys like it I'm still kind of learning here, so comments could help. THANK YOU VERY MUCH :D :D :D :D ___________________________________________________________________________ 'twas final

sorry for those minor errors, such as spacings and typos... I was knda typing it too fast without even checking. Haha Thanks for the reviews...

:D... Hope you guys like it... Please help me improve Your Photograph by: Kite Looking into the camera's sight, Aiming upon the target's smile, A click, followed by that warming ...

I wrote this yesterday, uhm a review would be appreciated THANK YOU :D :elephant: "You will be remembered" ____________________________ By: Kite *on editing*

I kinda wrote this poem a few weeks back, I know this isn't good so a review would be greatly appreciated thank you! :thud: "Our Parting" By: Kite _____________________________ We ...

Hi! This was a poem requested by a friend of mine, I'm not sure if it's good... a review would be highly appreciated... I had to rush it due to ...

The drawing is good and it does lack proportions. The basic face outline seems fine as said before, but the lips could've been placed a little higher don't you think? ...

thank you :D!

The story plot is indeed interesting and touching. Your grammar as said before has some mistakes that could be edited though. All in all, I do like it. I didn't ...

I wrote this poem a few years back, though I'm not sure if this is fine. A review would be very helpful. Thank you! _______________________________________________ Suddenly my days of fun ...

Nice poem :)

your welcome :D

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Unborn yet O' daughter of firs, Open thy eyes to the light, Thus born O' daughter of tears, I shalt train to be thy knight. Sleep so O' princess of ...