kirstybree

I know what this story is based on, I am guessing an hindu priest? That said I am not really sure what you are trying to say with this poem, ...

Wow, I really do like your style, the others have picked out the tiny little things, except I do like the word vacuum at the end. Though the title still ...

Even though this might not be in the right section, I love it. The way it's written is something I have never seen before. The imagry, the word choice, flowed ...

Focusing on everything else but the title is something I myself can relate to. But you should try to come up with one, it helps. And the point of view ...

I agree with the others, this sounds alot more like a thought bubble more than anything and it is a topic tackled many time before. But then again every topic ...

His eyes turned red as they looked at her My heart ached to see the sadness in his eyes He's our baby, my baby and his heart was aching With ...

I stayed. I don’t know why. I don’t know why I stayed the time before that, or the one before that, or the five other times before that. I just ...

Shadows play across our faces as cobwebs hang from our minds Echoing from our mouths the words still float in wait How much longer, how much more of this can ...

Okay. First off this is a common theme so, if you wish to tackle it then may I suggest that you try to put a different twist to it. Right ...

I am a bit confused by this poem myself. Like Amel I enjoy the line "Cradled by the earth, lit by the sun" but other wise the meaning alludes me ...

The day my mother came to pick me up in the fourth grade in a mini skirt and a halter top with her make up askew, completely drunk~Daniel Owens What ...

Hello everyone! Today is my first day here and I really am just using trial and error to figure things out. But I might need some help down the line. ...