kirstybree

6/10, they are a bit cliche

7/10, the bunny is cute.

7/10 I like the picture.

The blow goes past the ribs, Straight to the heart Grips the stomach, holds tight The pain turns to sadness And then it grows to anger The anger swallows whole ...

He drove me for a burger. May not have been gourmet but fast food was the only thing opened that late. Sitting across from me on a plastic booth he ...

at first this seems like a bunch of random thoughts, but they do make some sort of sense if you really read it. it's good for something written when your ...

I too like the last few lines. though the rest of it didnt' do much for me. the idea behind is a good one but the style it was written ...

I've nade the spelling and grammer revisions. Thank you both for your reviews, it brought my own typing errors to my attention. :D

At five you don't grasp the concept of death, at least not completely. A person is simply unreachable for the moment in time, not gone forever. My father's mother died ...

This is a really unique poem, with a detailed choice of language and for that reason it is great. However it confused me, because it's meaning is not all that ...

6/10 I don't really know what it is. But it's interesting.

It's basic, yes, but beside that I like the style that it is written in. It is not like some of your other poems I have read and that is ...

Okay, I understand that this is a light-hearted and, I am guessing nothing more than your thoughts on paper, because that's exactly what it seems like. There is no really ...

This poem is extremely basic. It doesn't really say anything other than a guy you loved left you with pain. It's like so many others only re-worded a bit. It ...

I adore the duck one! But all of them are beautiful! You a wonderful photographer!