kirstybree

Hahaha. this is so cute! I love it :D! The simple basic rhyming works with the whole hide and seek theme. I never would have done something like that. Nice!

You had a great start. it was unique and caught my attention. the last three stanza's though were weak and didn't fit in with the first three. I would either ...

I like this even though I am really sure what it is about. But the rhythm is very catchy and it somehow reminds me of a nursery rhyme. Nice work ...

I love this. I like the mixing of classic and modernt!

Flapjacks is adorable!!:D

The tatto and his pose is great. Yes, he looks very feminine but that is how he looks in life so that's okay. It great.

This is cute. It looks like it could be in a little flip book for kids. :)

I really like this! But it was not what I expected from the title.

I really like this one. The rhythm is nice. and it has a new spin on things. I love the first four lines. :)

9/10 Cute!

7/10 hahaha, nice.

The title is a little bland. the poem itself is more a thought bubble than a poem to me. Its very simple with no real structure. No flow, or rhythm. ...

8/10 so true

10/10 I love it!

I really like the chorus!