kirstybree

This written with my grandmother in mind. From her mistakes I learned, and this was written for her. Your input will be appreciated My life was lost in his. Whatever ...

This is a concept that has been done many times over but I like the simple approach that you took to it. The symbolism that you used was interesting. But ...

The first two lines though awkward I love the image it gives. Words paint a very real picture for me in my head and I really enjoyed the one your ...

Hey thanks. I didn't really like the ending either. I knew it didn't sound right but i didn't know exactly what. thanks for your help and i am taking out ...

This is short and sweet. I like the second stanza. Though some might say a little too simple I like simple. And I think everyone at some point can relate ...

With a face of an angel and a smile that can kill Her eyes burn a hole in you that only she could fill Maybe the next moment will bring ...

I agree with Razorblade. This is really short and confusing. I don't know if this is flash fiction, a short story or an intro, or middle of a story. it ...

6/10 I like the old film type feel

wow you're really great. I like the angles and the coloring on the first one was beautiful. I don't really have anything more constructive to say, sorry. Just thought I'd ...

This is amazing! the only thing that i don't like is finn's beard. :?

8/10 Interesting.

This is a good poem, strong, but for me personally i can't feel it. it seems like it's detached. But other than that great job!!

I agree with the other two. this poem doesn't do anything for me. It asks questions, that's it. And it is not like they are even unique questions, they are ...

He knew no one walking in. His head hung low he wanted to go unnoticed. But when he finally raised his eyes he could see that that simply wasn’t so. ...

It's a decent poem, but it's nothing more than that to me really. It seems as if it's an outline of a future poem. A skeleton if you will. It ...