kinzygirl223

Wow. That was really cool I liked it. I found it a little hard to follow at times. Still fantastic.

I thought that the topic was great. It really makes you think. Your descriptions were very good too. Very enjoyable

Hey please post a message i want to know what you think even though its not finished yet. Please do

You always seem to impress me. I get a feeling like im really there. This is very sad. Still very good. It was sweet how they died together. Great story. ...

Good story. I agree, a little graphic. Still good though. I think the tecnique was really good. It was never confusing, even though you were jumping back and forth. Entertainment. ...

I love this story and your sequil. I love your word choice. Please review some of my writing im new.

The worst thing to wait for is your father to come home. It has been so long since i’ve seen the shine in his eyes, the teeth showing smile, the ...