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I reallly liked this. I just have one question is Charlie a boy?? Just wondering. Otherwise i thought it was fantastic. I just got the vibe that Charlie was a ...

I would chose the number one. i thought it was good. I wan't to see what the rest of the story is like.

I has great potentail. I cant wait to read the rest. I love your word choice. Although i wonder what is wrong with her. It was very enjoyable though.

Please review.

The boys had purposely been fighting, and Jake purposely pushed Will. What he didn’t purposely do was ruin both of their lives. Now the guilt would last forever. It had ...

Very good. I enjoyed it completely. I can't wait to see what happens next. There were a couple spelling mistakes. Other than that I really didn't notice anything.

This poem is very powerful. I loved it. I felt for the person. I get a vibe that it's a girl though. So if you want to be more clear ...

i found very good. I thought it gave an amazing message. I also like the mystery of why her life sucked so bad. It's good. Sorry the review sucks so ...

That's what Will does to me every time I look at him. As if there's not a worry in the world. I, of course was brought back to reality. I ...

It felt so good knowing he cared about me this much. At least there was someone left in my life. I love hime too, but he would probably end up ...

I personally really liked it. I agree though i really think it should stay vague. It had some mystery. I loved it. Although in the first line instead of darkness ...

I really liked it. Very entertaining. I'm wondering about the connection between David and her though. If you weren't planning on it, i would highly recommend explaining that in more ...

I thought it was good. Although it went way to quickly. If you want to write a short story, come up with a topic that won't seem rushed even if ...

Wonderful. I love these photos. The drawing didn't show up but im sure it was equally amazing.

i liked them. They are very simple though. Still good. Some of the best pictures are simpler.