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Re: My Brother Has A Gun
WOW. This was really good. Spelling..... I know everyone has said that but yeah. I loved it though. It was kind of scary and really intense. :))))
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: My man
All these helped thank you sooo much.
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: True Love, You'll Always Find It
WOW!!! I loved this poem I think it is AMAZING!!! I wish I had a better Critique but i don't sorry. LOVED IT
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Aspects of the Backyard
I think these pictures a very good. They are very mysterious. I loved them. Good job
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: A hand takes yours
I loved this poem. I seriously felt like crying. It has soo much meaning. I loved it.
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: The Person Watching Me*Edited 2/20/08*
This was really good..... I liked it. Hmmm this is a sucky review but yeah. I dont have any suggestions.
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: My man
Thanks for reviewing I will think about those changes!!
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Sanctuary
Hmmm. I like it but i dont really get it. It has a good flow and every thing. I don't know. Is it meant for the reader to imagine what ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Lyla. Part 15
Once again just as good as the other ones. I love you work. You had great discription I can almost feel the way she does. Only one thing you said ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: My man
Rated for one curse word thanks for reading feel free to critique. I might be submitting this to school so tell me if it is suitable. He wasn't only a ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Hurt
Wow. This is really good. It is very powerful. I wish i had a better critique. Sorry.
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Black and White
I LOVE these pictures. I think the have a lot of hidden meaning. Like more then meets the eye. I love them.
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: I hate...
I liked it I felt like it had good feeling. Good job. I wish i could give a better critique.
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Field Trip Part 1
Wow. Intense. I really liked it i cant wait to read the rest of it. It had a good characteristic that keep me interested. I loved it.
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: Flat 17
HMMM. Interesting. I thought that it was good. I didn't know if you were saying that the girl was a ghost or not. Who are you??? I think it has ...
Jan 27, 2008
