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Hey. This is a very interesting poem. I found that strangely, it flowed decently well, even though the stanzas were broken up in awkward places. What I liked about the ...

I wish. Have been called that before. TUBM just did a bunny hop.

Hey. I really like the idea of the poem. I know others may not, but I do. there isn't much crtisism I have for this piece, except that I don't ...

Hey. This was really good. It was discripitive, in a way that didn't tell you evrything, but told you what you needed to know, and it was a good length. ...

Hey. This is the first time I'm reviewing like this, so if I stuff us, sorry. My stuff will hopefully be in red. Sometimes I feel invisible No one sees ...

Hey. I thought that this was a good idea for a poem, and with a few changes, it could be better. The first thing I have to say is that ...

Hey. There are good things and bad things in this poem. The first line, 'Break me the sunset in a cup;' doesn't seem to work. I read the poem a ...

Many times I have heard before, that sound which makes me shiver. It is like a chilling wind, that rushes down my spine. It is a voice so soft and ...

Hey. This is a good poem. It has a good story and meaning to it, and it is not too long. I like how you talk about the butterflies, then ...

This is in response to a challenge I received after writing a fairly depressing poem. I had to write a poem about joie de vivre, which after a quick google, ...

Its not that great, but its what I came up with. Trash it, hate it, burn it, shoot it. Then tell me how to fix it. --------------------------------------- I walk among ...

Hey. I think this is great. I really like the idea of what the glass wall is. It is deep and thoughtful. One nitpick I have, is that I don't ...

Hey. I enjoyed this. It was a good length and not too long, and it had a good rhyme and rhythm to it. I think it is a great effort ...

Hey. I think this was really well written. It wasn't long and drawn out like it could have been, and the repetition had a good impact. I also liked how ...

Hey. This wasn't what I was expecting. It was very different to how I thought it would turn out. When I was reading the first part, I thought it was ...