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Hey. I thought this was really good. I thought it was descriptive, and gave a lot of imagery. But I think you do need to cut down on the length ...

Hey. It thought it was a good first effort. Unlike most people (or just people that I have seen) you had structure to your first post. That is always good. ...

This is just something I wrote yesterday. It isn't that great, so trash it, burn it and shoot it. But then tell me how I can make it better. ------------------------------------------ ...

Hey. I think that this poem is great. First off, I have to say that the idea of 'I am a dreamer' or 'I am in a dream world' is ...

Hey. I liked this poem. I thought it was well written, and had a pretty good rhythm to it. I think it had a good meaning to it, and I ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I think it didn't flow greatly at some points, but worked most of the way through. I really liked the idea you ...

Hey. I thought this was a good poem. But I don't particularly like the repetition of the last line either. I thought it was good at the start, but then ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I tried writing something like this a bit back, but I failed. You did well though. I thought that the contradictions worked ...

Hey. This isn't a type of poem that is seen very often. (Or maybe that's just me) But I liked the idea of it. There are a few things I ...

Hey Coter. This is an interesting poem. There are both things I like and dislike. What I like, is the idea of the poem, and what you are trying to ...

I am the face in the crowd, that you walk right past, and don't give a second thought. I am the person you do not see, unless you're looking for ...

Hey. This is a good poem. It is well written, and has a good flow to it. What I find with a lot of poems, is that if they rhyme, ...

Hey. I'll put it this way. There are problems with this poem. Firstly, in the first section, you are just saying point about what you think. And the line 'rain ...

Hay. I quite liked this poem. Unlike Galerius, after I read the first two lines, I thought that this wasn't going to be that great, because I found that your ...

Hey. I have to say, that I too agree and disagree. I don't think the stanzas were too cliche. I personalty liked the last stanza the most. I liked how ...