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I just felt like writing this. If you've read any of my other stuff, you know that no good can come of it. The idea of the first line just ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I thought it was written in a good perspective as a younger child. What I really liked was the ending. It was ...

Hey Day. I did a review on the chapter, but it may not be that great. I don't usually review novels.

Hey Day. I guess you were right. It wasn't the most exiting or thrilling chapter I've read, but its better than a lot of stuff. I did pick up a ...

This is one way of doing things. I'll review for a small fee of $9.98 US. Joking. That's no fun. Free reviews. Conditions: Will Not Review Novels Some short stories ...

Hey. I thought that this was good. The imagery is good, and I can see what you are trying to say. I only really have two things to say about ...

True. And cool. 8.5/10

This was part of a non-connected series, the Misforunate Happenings series. This is number four. I've posted number two as well, but they aren't that great. I'm posting this under ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I thought that it flowed well and that it worked well. I think that if you expand a little on your second ...

Hey. This is a good poem. I used to write poems like this. I found that they say more than you let on. I like the idea of the road ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. I felt it had deep emotion in it, and that I knew what you were saying. I only have one critique, and that ...

Two words were all I had. But I knew it was not enough. Three times you told me so, and I shall never forget. Many thing I've done wrong, but ...

Hey. This is a great poem. I really understood what you were saying. It was a very powerful piece. On more of the structure side of things, I thought that ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. I thought this poem was a good try for a first post. It had a good idea to the poem, and you also had a good ...

Hey. I thought that this was good. I like the idea of being free, but not just in the normal sense of walking around and living in one place. But ...