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Hey. I thought it was really good, except for the structure. It was meaningful and it had really good imagery, but I think it should be more structured like this. ...

Hey. To start off, the idea to me was very cliche, and have had that said to my work a lot as well. But each person had a different way ...

Hey. I really liked what you tried to do with this poem. I found that it took me also a couple of lines to get into it. But when I ...

I wish I had the screaming back, to drown out the silent noise. It thuds like thunder in my head when I know there's nothing there. The sound of silence ...

I'm doing this for you. So be grateful. I'll be brief so you don't get too bored. I'll do any poem and most short stories of any rating. I will ...

I know the name isn't that great for this poem, but I couldn't think of anything else. --------------------------- I try to find some comfort, in a world that never sleeps. ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. It had a great rhythm and rhyme to it, and flowed really well. Well, I thought this after I got through the first ...

I feel as if you watch over me, but I know you can't talk back, so here I am trying, to be here for you. I always leave a spot ...

Hey. First off, I don't usually review short stories, but here I am again. I thought that this was really good. I thought it was descriptive and had a good ...

I know there are faults, so help me please. Or, you know, just burn it to ash. -------------------------- Forget you I shall not, or anything you do or say. Forgive ...

Hey Scar. I thought this was really good. I found it flowed really well, and the rhyming scheme was strong. But I thought the rhythm in the last stanza was ...

Hey. I thought that you might have lead a different direction with the idea, but I liked what you did. The only real thing that I have a problem with, ...

Hey. I don't usually review stories and/novels, but here I am. I thought that this was great. It was well written and you left me hanging in suspence. Because of ...

This is a slightly disturbing poem I wrote. No idea why I wrote it, but that's the point. Trash it then burn it. ---------------------------- Each day you ask me how ...

I wrote this, and thought that I wasn't going to post it, but one of my friends really liked it and told me to post it. So here it is. ...