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Re: Redemption
This is just something I did while procrastinating my homework. It's not that great, but I want to know how to make it better. I watched as they took him. ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Life, Death, and Everything in Between
It seems that everything I want to post, is written at least a little at school. So here is another thing I have written. Life. It is the thing that ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: The Darkness of Death
Thanks for the input. I'm glad that it is liked. About the proverb comment, I was actually writing it to use as a bible or something in a book like ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: The Darkness of Death
This is just something I wrote while bored in class. It's not that great, so please tell me what I can do to make this, and anything else I write, ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Never Good Enough
Hey. It is really good. Just remember, you don't [i]need[i] to have your work rhyme, but you can also use it to make what you want to write more powerful. ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: The unnamed poem
It was really good, and not like what people would normally write. That would be why I like it. I like the bit Run baby, run. Do the things they ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: A Quick poem that I wrote last night
It is really good. It makes you think about all you have written. Just one thing. 'They may of stopped me from fleeing' Did you mean to say They may ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: As each minute passes by
As each minute passes by, a little more of me fades away. It does not die, but it is more like it never existed. And as each minute passes by, ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Fires of Life
This is my first post. I have written other things too, but this is the first I have ever published. I hope you like it. Born to a life unwilling ...
Apr 21, 2010
