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  • Other Poetry Re: Redemption

    This is just something I did while procrastinating my homework. It's not that great, but I want to know how to make it better. I watched as they took him. ...

    Apr 26, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Life, Death, and Everything in Between

    It seems that everything I want to post, is written at least a little at school. So here is another thing I have written. Life. It is the thing that ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Darkness of Death

    Thanks for the input. I'm glad that it is liked. About the proverb comment, I was actually writing it to use as a bible or something in a book like ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Darkness of Death

    This is just something I wrote while bored in class. It's not that great, so please tell me what I can do to make this, and anything else I write, ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Never Good Enough

    Hey. It is really good. Just remember, you don't [i]need[i] to have your work rhyme, but you can also use it to make what you want to write more powerful. ...

    Apr 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The unnamed poem

    It was really good, and not like what people would normally write. That would be why I like it. I like the bit Run baby, run. Do the things they ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A Quick poem that I wrote last night

    It is really good. It makes you think about all you have written. Just one thing. 'They may of stopped me from fleeing' Did you mean to say They may ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: As each minute passes by

    As each minute passes by, a little more of me fades away. It does not die, but it is more like it never existed. And as each minute passes by, ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fires of Life

    This is my first post. I have written other things too, but this is the first I have ever published. I hope you like it. Born to a life unwilling ...

    Apr 21, 2010


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