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Re: The Art of Nature
Hey Coter. As I said, I don't like reviewing Haiku's but I'm doing it anyway. I thought that this was rather good. Haiku's aren't that easy to do, but I ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: As seasons go by...
Hey ROC. First of, I have to say, I really don't like reviewing haiku's. Please don't ask me why, I just don't. But here is my attempt at it... Seeing ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Secrets
Hey KAH. I'm sorry, but because I have no originality, I'm going to do this the way I usually do. I really liked this poem. I liked the idea of ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: This Wooden Box
I wanted to write something a little different. Here was my attempt. ------------------------------- I wish that I could touch your face, or smell you lush brown hair. But every time ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Way Out
This was just a short story (which isn't that short) that I wrote for fun. (Or what I call fun) It's my style of writing, so I hope it's not ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: Sarah
Hey. I thought this was really good. I thought it flowed well, with a really good rhythm. I also thought that it's rhyming scheme was really good. It didn't seem ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
Hey. First off, I want to say that I think that this is really good. I just thinks it needs to be expanded on. I think it being not capitalized ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: The Tears I Couldn't Shed
I know it's not that great, but I thought I had to post it. --------------------------- You asked me why I never cried, when I saw her lying there. You thought ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: What being scares you most?
Twilight fans freak me out. Including the guys at my school. You know who you are.... *evil glares*
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: A Single Bullet
It's longer that stuff I usually write, but here it is.... Think what you want. Burn it if you wish. ---------------------------------- I always thought that when I died, I would ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The Words You Spoke
Again, something random I wrote. Dust to dust, ashes to ashes. Burn it if you wish. ----------------------------- I see you struggle to find the world, and I let you take ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Black and Blue ch.3
Hey. I just want to say, that I don't usually review novels. (Mainly because I'm not that good at both reviewing and writing them.) But here is my attempt. I ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: The Eyes Of Death
People had been talking about death and what may come after, so this came to mind. Burn it if you want. You can keep the ashes. ------------------------------- I looked into ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: tinnitus
Hey. I thought this was a little short. I think it can be extended on a fair bit. It seems more like an idea rather than a poem like this. ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: In Light Of The Subject
Hey. Firstly, I don't usually read things based on current stories because I like originality. But I guess you got there with that. So this is what I thought. At ...
Aug 14, 2010
