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  • Other Poetry Re: The Art of Nature

    Hey Coter. As I said, I don't like reviewing Haiku's but I'm doing it anyway. I thought that this was rather good. Haiku's aren't that easy to do, but I ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: As seasons go by...

    Hey ROC. First of, I have to say, I really don't like reviewing haiku's. Please don't ask me why, I just don't. But here is my attempt at it... Seeing ...

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Secrets

    Hey KAH. I'm sorry, but because I have no originality, I'm going to do this the way I usually do. I really liked this poem. I liked the idea of ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: This Wooden Box

    I wanted to write something a little different. Here was my attempt. ------------------------------- I wish that I could touch your face, or smell you lush brown hair. But every time ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Way Out

    This was just a short story (which isn't that short) that I wrote for fun. (Or what I call fun) It's my style of writing, so I hope it's not ...

    Sep 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Sarah

    Hey. I thought this was really good. I thought it flowed well, with a really good rhythm. I also thought that it's rhyming scheme was really good. It didn't seem ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Illusion

    Hey. First off, I want to say that I think that this is really good. I just thinks it needs to be expanded on. I think it being not capitalized ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Tears I Couldn't Shed

    I know it's not that great, but I thought I had to post it. --------------------------- You asked me why I never cried, when I saw her lying there. You thought ...

    Sep 10, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What being scares you most?

    Twilight fans freak me out. Including the guys at my school. You know who you are.... *evil glares*

    Sep 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A Single Bullet

    It's longer that stuff I usually write, but here it is.... Think what you want. Burn it if you wish. ---------------------------------- I always thought that when I died, I would ...

    Sep 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Words You Spoke

    Again, something random I wrote. Dust to dust, ashes to ashes. Burn it if you wish. ----------------------------- I see you struggle to find the world, and I let you take ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Black and Blue ch.3

    Hey. I just want to say, that I don't usually review novels. (Mainly because I'm not that good at both reviewing and writing them.) But here is my attempt. I ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Eyes Of Death

    People had been talking about death and what may come after, so this came to mind. Burn it if you want. You can keep the ashes. ------------------------------- I looked into ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: tinnitus

    Hey. I thought this was a little short. I think it can be extended on a fair bit. It seems more like an idea rather than a poem like this. ...

    Aug 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: In Light Of The Subject

    Hey. Firstly, I don't usually read things based on current stories because I like originality. But I guess you got there with that. So this is what I thought. At ...

    Aug 14, 2010


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