kingolions

I live in a world unknown to others, deep inside the hidden caves. No others pass through the shallow pools. Or rest their heads on the grassy plain. In quiet ...

I seem to be obsessed with writing sad and dreary poems. So I gave a shot at a nice happy poem. Because that worked out. ------------------------------- I look out the ...

Hey. I really liked this. I don't normally read (or write) romance, but I really enjoyed this one. I do have one little thing to pick at though. In the ...

This is something I literally wrote in 2 minutes, because I was bored. Please don't say that I wasn't descriptive enough, because it is supposed to leave them to your ...

Hey. I like this poem. It isn't like most poems, but that's what makes it good. The only thing I have to pick at, is the second line. 'It carries ...

Hey. I really liked this chapter too. I do want to say though, that you should re-read what you have written, especial with stories, and check your grammar. There are ...

Hey. Just doing the review you asked me to do. I really like this story. It has a great idea to it, and it makes you want to keep reading ...

Hey. I loved this poem. I'm sorry, but someone has to say it. This poem was kinda cheesy! But I really like t. It was creative, and not many people ...

Hey. This is a great poem. I like how it flowed, and you could picture what you were saying. I especially liked how your rhyming scheme worked. It was rhyming, ...

Hey. I don't know what to say, exept that I loved this story. I thought it was a great idea, and for a first try, it was a lot better ...

This was just something I wrote, while waiting. That's all I was doing. (I hope that doesn't make me psycho.) ---------------------------- Each sound you made, bored deeper into my soul. ...

This is a short story which is part of a non-connecting series called Misfortunate Happenings. The stories are not linked in any way, except that something bad happens. This was ...

Hey. I like the idea for this piece, and I like your motivation for it. The thing I have to pick at, it the way the piece is written. It ...

I hear the yelling, and the screaming. I hear the shouts of pain and anger. It sounds so different to me than you. There is a war inside my head. ...

Hey. I really like what you wrote. It has depth and meaning to it. It makes you think about more than just what happened, but the consequences that came from ...