kingolions

Hey. Really good poem. I thought it all read well and flowed well. It also made me think about what you were asking. I think it is well written, and ...

Hey. This is great. I really like the idea you created. It is like a crime story made into a poem. But I think it works well. I really like ...

Once there was a whisper, deep inside my mind. When I heard it calling, I left the world behind. Deep inside my own world, I was lost in a place ...

Hey. Gone by Michael Grant was really good. But if you want, have a look at the maximum ride series. The first is called The Angel Experiment. Also, there is ...

Hey. This was really good. I like the idea of the window, and how it fogs. It really painted a picture of what was happening. The one thing that I ...

Umm... Firstly, just want to say that this was not what I was expecting to read. But that was half of why I liked it so much. I thought it ...

Hey. I really liked this. The only thing I am wary of, is that (to me at least) it didn't flow properly. When I read it, I was reading each ...

This isn't that great, but though I could get some help to make it better. ------------------------------------- A single leaf falling from the tree, burning with all the pain and misery. ...

you get a toothpick -insert coin-

9/10 It's kinda cool

Hey. I usually start off my reviews by saying, 'I really like this poem.' And once again, that was how I was going to start it. But by saying what ...

Hey. This was an unusual idea, but that is one of the thing that makes it better. I like how it used the image of light and dark. It is ...

Hey. Firstly, (and I know this contradicts your name, but) I really liked this poem. It didn't have a rhyming scheme, but poetry doesn't have to have one. Some times ...

Hey. I have been on YWS for a bit, but haven't even much looked at this section of the site. So I thought, why not stick some stuff up about ...

Hey. I like what you have written. It is not like most of what you see written. It is a little short though. But I've done that too. I do ...